ash: "Ever since I met you, it feels like an ekans is coming out of my pants....."
cynthia: "Oh Ash, for the past 3 hours, I've felt the exact same!"
does that imply cynthia is a guy???
overall, it's ok... some sound effects are missing, some jokes are funny
Hahaha I didn't even pick up on that, shit whatever makes it funnier. Sure I guess thats a good subplot for the sequal. Will she get it removed? Probably not..
It needs music! Otherwise, good job!
it has credit music does that count?
Wow!!! Short and Funny!!!
I actually took the time to read all of those really fast messages when he got the new tool!
The fast parts included:
"And that's how blood works and boy are you gonna see a lot of it. Hey by the way did you see that film about tingle in the park?"
"Wow, you skiped that message preaty quickly. You must be a good reader."
"Its sick what he dose to those kids. All you heard was eeinf eeinf kalloo impah it was weird."
"Ok now im starting to think your not reading them at all."
"Thats it you asked for this... your parents are dead and your not realy and elf so ha."
"you still have stupid ears though you freak."
"im sorry I take that last bit back you actualy have very nice ears"
I spelled the words exactly the same that they were spelled in the messages. Overall it would have been better if the video was a little longer. Nice Video!!!
yea i think i spelled a few things wrong in there. but thanks for posting that allot of people keep asking me what they say
Wow that was an awesome game! The boss was unexpected, but completely awesome! I died on 17 the most while I spent the longest time on 18 (I never did use the red button). Awesome game! I hope there is going to be a sequel!!!
This game requires very little skill to play. sometimes the stars don't fall fast enough to the point where you drive past them before they actually land. The game play itself was boring after the first race track. It's too linear and simple. There is very little challenge in the game. Also, on one track, my car randomly decided to face left and it took me forever to turn it around. Maybe you should just make the car only face one direction the entire game.
please test your game first several times to see if you find any flaws and improve them... Lots of music problems! (At two different parts in the game I had more than one song playing at the same time) There wasn't a whole lot of effort put into making the buttons (either the text didn't fit on the buttons or weird black lines were drawn on them)
other than that, some of the questions weren't even Nintendo related (spongebob for example, so i would suggest having different title.
I would go on, but I've been harsh enough as it is... Please spend more time making your quizzes!!!
I remind you that you that the off-topic question 1. Don't answer until the music finishes or you will get the music .3.
I don't think it's necessarily a boss theme, but it definitely has that evil/dark theme. It's sounds like it would be the theme that would be playing right before you get to the boss. If if was a boss theme, it would be more intense feeling when listening to it. It's not bad, and I'm not saying that you couldn't use it as a boss theme. I just felt that the song never really burst out with excitement or with a faster paced theme that would be the chorus of the song. Since this is your first audio that you made, you did an awesome job. I would suggest changing the title, but that's just my opinion (my first songs sucked btw).
Now that I think about it, it does seem a bit more fitting to a theme right before the boss you are right.
I'm glad that you like it, as your review is extremely motivational!
As far as the title change, I may change it later... That is, once I figure out how xD
I could have sworn that this sounded like it was an 8 bit version of one of the songs from The Adventures of Batman & Robin game for the Sega Genesis, but I can't figure out which song it sounds like the most. It definitely sounds like it would fit for that game (minus the 8 bit). Great song! The ending could be better.
I was definitely expecting the drums to come in sooner. Otherwise its a good song! I wouldn't say that Doomsday is a good name for it, especially since after the intro it no longer sounds like a doomsday type of song. Overall, it's not bad!
The drawing is ok. The body doesnt look that great, maybe spend more time on adding more details to the arms, legs, and especially the body. The body also loses proportions as well (an example is the body is way too skinny right above the back legs.) But on the bright side, the face is really good and detailed!
I have to agree with 471472 about the dwarfing on Midna's left arm and leg. I understand what you were saying about the proportions that they are going to be different sizes. I think the only thing you could have done different was to make the right leg not so big, then that will help out for the most part with the dwarfing problem. However, it isn't that big of a deal since the rest of the picture looks awesome!
Thankyou for the level-headed response.
I think I'm begining to see the problem with the artwork clearer.
If I do as you say, or even just enlarge distant leg slightly, it would be less confusing to the eye.
Thanks again :)
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